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You have selected good points to show how power corrupts MB. I like how you define your concept and you begin to show what he was like prior. I would develop this area a bit more and then you can show more how the power has corrupted him.You also mention he is insane. How do you define insane? Was Mb really insane or just extremely power hungry and a leader who murdered many. be sure to explain all your terms. Overall well said.